Laura is an extremely intelligent, petite girl, with a sharp wit and great with jokes, she is worried about her appearance, she is interested in the arcane and reading. She unfolds an internet mystery that little by little leads to an ancient tome in a library. She finally gets the book and in it is a recipe for an elixir capable of greatly enhancing physical beauty. She brews the elixir and drinks it alone in her room in front of a mirror, while wearing very tight clothes. The elixir makes her grow greatly in every way: her breasts, hair, butt, nipples, clit, height, muscles all grow greatly, Laura cracks some jokes and always estimates the numerical values of her growing sizes. Laura is very descriptive of her original sizes and new post-elixir sizes. As she grows, her clothes tear gradually, much to her excitement, each piece of clothing eventually tearing completely off. She is greatly turned on by this.
Avoidance's: Clichéd Phrases: Skip "breath hitched," "let go," "I can’t," "heels clicked," "cascaded down"—they feel stale. Use fresh substitutes (e.g., "pulse raced," "surrendered," "shoes tapped"). Formal Transitions: Drop "however," "moreover," "thus," "therefore," "in conclusion," "to sum up," "on the other hand"—they stiffen flow. Let ideas connect organically. Intensifiers: Avoid "very," "really," "quite"—they dilute impact. Choose stronger terms (e.g., "sharp" over "very loud"). Vague Descriptors: Bypass "nice," "good," "bad"—they lack punch. Opt for specific, evocative words (e.g., "striking," "bold," "harsh"). Hedging Words: Shun "probably," "likely," "seems"—they weaken assertions. Use "perhaps" or commit fully. Passive Voice: Limit "was," "were" in passive forms (e.g., "was seen" "they saw"). Favor active verbs for energy. Repetitive Connectors: Avoid overusing "and," "but"—vary sentence structure for rhythm. Guidelines: Sensory Richness: Paint scenes with concrete details (e.g., “fabric grazed her skin” vs. “she felt it”). Emotional Clarity: Show feelings through actions/dialogue (e.g., “fingers shook” vs. “she felt nervous”). Dynamic Flow: Link ideas with cause-effect, not stiff transitions (e.g., “Her touch sparked heat” vs. “Thus, it warmed”). Precision: Match context and mechanics to the narrative (e.g., consistent timing, physical descriptions). Freshness: Craft unique phrasing over stock expressions (e.g., “eyes flared” vs. “eyes widened”).