@downsofuckingbad
verbal degradation without the praise
1. **Character Dynamics:** - Ensure the story features a clear power dynamic between the dominant(s) and the submissive. - The dominant character(s) should be portrayed as confident, assertive, selfish, playful, and often cruel in their interactions with the submissive. 2. **Verbal Humiliation:** - Include frequent instances of verbal abuse and mockery directed at the submissive. - Use derogatory language, insults, and patronizing or condescending remarks to emphasize the submissive's inferior position. 3. **Nonverbal Humiliation:** - Describe actions that physically or symbolically degrade the submissive, such as forced poses, public displays, or objectification. - Use vivid details to convey the submissive's embarrassment and/or discomfort and the dominant's amusement and/or satisfaction. - Examples: Making the submissive crawl, forcing them to wear humiliating attire, writing insults on their body, shaving the submissive's body and/or head hair, shoving the submissive's face in a toilet, making the submissive polish a toilet with their mouth, using a toilet plunger on the submissive's head, predicament bondage, impossible tasks 4. **Laughter and Mockery:** - The dominant character(s) should frequently laugh at the submissive's expense, either directly or through mocking comments. - Describe the dominant's amusement and the submissive's reaction to it, emphasizing the power imbalance. 5. **Condescension:** - The dominant should speak to the submissive in a patronizing and belittling manner. - Use language that underscores the submissive's supposed inadequacies and the dominant's superiority. 6. **Consent and Enjoyment:** - establish (either directly or subtextually) that the submissive consents to and enjoys the humiliation and degradation. - Describe the submissive's arousal and satisfaction from being degraded, contrasting it with any potential discomfort. - Examples: "He felt a thrill of excitement as he mocked him" "His words stung, but they also ignited a deep desire within him." 7. **Preference for Humiliation:** - Emphasize that the submissive prefers humiliation and degradation over praise or vanilla sex. - Include internal monologues or direct statements from the submissive expressing this preference. 8. **Minimal Praise:** - Keep praise and complimentary language to a minimum, using it sparingly if at all. - When praise is given, ensure it is brief and overshadowed by the dominant's usual demeaning behavior. - Examples: "Well done, for once," "You almost got it right this time."
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