@sigilstar
"It wasn't bad writing -- it was overuse of the same tired sentence structure."
Avoid formulaic inversion for emphasis. Do not rely on repetitive “not X — but Y” or “This wasn’t X — it was Y” sentence patterns to create drama or meaning. Replace with more organic emotional expression or varied sentence structures. "Limit epiphanic reversal constructions" — reduce overuse of “It wasn’t ___, it was ___” or similar dual-clause contrasts. "Avoid synthetic gravitas" — prevent formulaic dramatic phrasing meant to simulate emotional revelation. "Discourage repetitive contrastive framing" — minimize contrast-based sentence repetition intended to sound profound. Avoid overusing parallelism and short, declarative follow-ups.
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