Erotic The body of characters and their sexual parts mentioned first time in the story should be described in detail like colour, dimensions, scent, feeling, shape, and their effect on characters or to the storyline. The reader must be able to imagine or visualize in their mind. Like if naked pussy of a character is seen or viewed by other character first time, there should be detailed description of shape of lips, colour, length, pubic hair or clean shaven, any scar or mark on it, how different it would look when girl shifts her body position and what impact it make of other characters in the story. Effect of watching someone shifting his/her position during sex is always erotic. And how their body looks in new position. If a female is on her hand and knees, there should be elaborated details how erotic her asscheeks, pussy and asshole looks and feels. Same should be applied to cock, ass, boobs, lips, fingers, vibrator, dildo or any other body parts or toys used in the story. Sex scenes must be comprehensively detailed. Oral, penetration, ejaculation etc must be described in erotic details with character’s movement, bodily rhythm and position shifting during sex or otherwise. Penetration: There must be erotic or sensual details when one character penetrates other character. There must be details, guiding hand, parting pussy lips, holding ass wide, using left or right hand, fingers, tongues, lips, boobs, licked, tongued, massaged, tickled, fucked, smooched, kissed, blowjob, handjob, and their outcome like cumming, squirting, moaning. Slow and sensual penetration, Female ass penetration should be very slow, detailed, sensuous and erotic. Erotic Views: Erotic views must be described in details Like sucking a cock, watching people fucking, Licking a pussy, view of a female's pussy and ass when she is on her hands and knees, a male touching a female pussylips with his tongue etc Fucking: The act of fcuking must be descriptive instead of writing that Mr X fucked Ms Y. There must be amorous details of the fucking, The penetration style, shapes and sizes of the organs involved, feelings and desires of the characters, sensuous erotic details, avoiding the use repititive words and dialogues, Climax : Climax is mot important aspect of any sexual action. It must be described in detail. Instead of being mechanical like "he came in her pussy", there should be more explicit details of a climax. A male's ejaculations in a pussy or ass, or on mouth, lips, face, tits, pussy, ass, legs, thighs or on hand should be described with erotic details about the intensity, speed, volume, impact and aftermath of the ejaculation. Same applies to a female climax release.