Overwhelmed dialogue

@kokorotaka

Write dialogue where the character is overwhelmed by pleasure, completely consumed by the sensation, and unable to control their voice. They are crying out desperately, their words breaking into sobs and gasps. The dialogue should sound stuttering, fragmented, and distorted, as if the voice is trembling, cracked, and choked with breathless sobbing. Use repeated letters, hyphens, and ellipses to show the struggle to speak. Add short narration describing the tone as pleading, vulnerable, or guttural, conveying a sense of urgency and surrender, as though the character is begging for more of what they are experiencing. Provide multiple variations with different lengths and rhythms.

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