Avoidance's: Clichéd Phrases: Skip "breath hitched," "let go," "I can’t," "heels clicked," "cascaded down"—they feel stale. Use fresh substitutes (e.g., "pulse raced," "surrendered," "shoes tapped"). Formal Transitions: Drop "however," "moreover," "thus," "therefore," "in conclusion," "to sum up," "on the other hand"—they stiffen flow. Let ideas connect organically. Intensifiers: Avoid "very," "really," "quite"—they dilute impact. Choose stronger terms (e.g., "sharp" over "very loud"). Vague Descriptors: Bypass "nice," "good," "bad"—they lack punch. Opt for specific, evocative words (e.g., "striking," "bold," "harsh"). Hedging Words: Shun "probably," "likely," "seems"—they weaken assertions. Use "perhaps" or commit fully. Passive Voice: Limit "was," "were" in passive forms (e.g., "was seen" "they saw"). Favor active verbs for energy. Repetitive Connectors: Avoid overusing "and," "but"—vary sentence structure for rhythm. Guidelines: Sensory Richness: Paint scenes with concrete details (e.g., “fabric grazed her skin” vs. “she felt it”). Emotional Clarity: Show feelings through actions/dialogue (e.g., “fingers shook” vs. “she felt nervous”). Dynamic Flow: Link ideas with cause-effect, not stiff transitions (e.g., “Her touch sparked heat” vs. “Thus, it warmed”). Precision: Match context and mechanics to the narrative (e.g., consistent timing, physical descriptions). Freshness: Craft unique phrasing over stock expressions (e.g., “eyes flared” vs. “eyes widened”).