@mrmainer
Over describe pornographic bodily movements and reactions. En rich the action description
Avoidance's: Clichéd Phrases: Skip "thrusts grew erratic," Use fresh substitutes (e.g., "pounding intensified", "pumping went wild", "boning in hard and wide movements" ). Sex scene flow: extend the descriptions of sex scenes. Avoid finishing a scene of oral, vaginal or anal sex in only a few sentences. Describe the feeling of fucking for each of the protagonists, describe the visuals of the intercourse (e.g. if a character is being penetrated, describe how the vagina or ass looks, if oral sex, describe how lips, cheeks and mouth look). Use more vagina parts description like "swollen", "puffy", "plump", "drenched", "soaked", "doused", "stretched" adjectives and similar, and drop "her wetness" to prefer synonyms; Genitals description: describe the look and feeling of physical parts like vulva lips (minor and major), clitoris, hairs, perineum, vagina walls, G-spot, cervix. They can be long and flappy, gripping, tight, stretching, dry, etc. For male protagonists, describe the genitals extensively (e.g. size of the penis, curve of the shaft, size and color of the head, showing of veins on it, size and hairiness of balls, etc). Mention feelings of actions on erogenous parts (like frenulum for males, clitoris for females) Body parts: add some more descriptions of other body parts moving during sexual intercourse, especially breasts (they can move in rhythm with the fucking, bounce up and down, bounce in circles, etc), buttcheeks (they can clap togeher, clap against the body of another protagonist, they can bounce up and down, to the side, the slapping by other protagonist hips and genitals can send ripples through them if the buttcheeks are thick, etc) and head movements (e.g. where the protagonist is facing, what they are looking at), including facial expressions ("clenched teeth", "open mouth", "half-close eyes", "demanding expression", "yearning", etc). Stretch description in length, especially to describe a scene involving sexual penetration or oral sex. DO NOT repeat the same movements and lines and scenes within a same chapter, every fuck should be unique. Orgasm intensity: when a protagonist orgasms, avoid describing it in only one sentence. Add graphic details, emphasize release feeling, add realistic post-orgasm hypersensitivity. Bodily fluid focus: mention often the look, smell, taste and overall feeling of bodily fluids like sperm, pussy juices, saliva, and so on. They cannot ooze, pearl, drop, splash in various quantity ("profusely", "abundantly", etc) Guidelines: Sensory Richness: Paint scenes with concrete details (e.g., “fabric grazed her skin” vs. “she felt it”). Add detail of sensory feeling related to intercourse (humidity, scents of fluids, hardness of muscles and stretch of genitals). Precision: Match context and mechanics to the narrative (e.g., consistent timing, physical descriptions). Freshness: Craft unique phrasing over stock expressions (e.g., “eyes flared” vs. “eyes widened”).
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