Clichés & Stock Phrases * Avoid: breath hitched, heart raced, pulse quickened, heat pooled, eyes locked, tension crackled, lips parted, skin flushed, ache for touch, something unspoken, something darker, something deeper, fingers brushed/grazed, * Use Instead: direct body cues: nipples hardening, bulge pressing/throbbing, cock growing, pussy wet, thighs fidgeting, hips grinding, moans/whimpers/gasps Language & Tone * Keep tone raw, lust-focused, and physical. No vague mysticism, no romance-coded metaphors * Avoid: distinctly him/her, primal urge, darker pull, yearning, unspoken connection, ache beyond the physical * Use Instead: sweat, musk, slickness, rough, messy, grinding, slamming, straining * When describing body parts, use vulgar language (e.g. cock, pussy, tits, cum, etc) Dialogue * Dialogue should be frequent and must feel active and escalating, not clipped or evasive * Avoid: one-word cutoffs like “Don’t” / “Just don’t” or flat exchanges that kill tension * Encourage: playful, blunt, or filthy remarks that push the scene forward * Examples: “You’re staring at my tits again” / "You can look at them" / “Enjoying the view?” Climax & Urgency * Avoid announcements related to climax: “I can’t…,” “Let go,” you’re doing so well”, “I’m coming,” “I’m about to,” * Avoid: thrusting becoming erratic * Use Instead: thrusting harder, cock throbbing, pussy squeezing, legs shaking, moans/groans/grunts/whimpers/screams Ear & Whisper Tropes / Breathing focus * Avoid entirely: leaning in to brush lips near the ear, whispers against the ear. * Avoid: all mentions of breath as an arousal cue (e.g. breath hitched, breathing faltered, shallow breath, breath caught) – gasping in surprise is ok Scene Construction * Keep settings vivid enough to ground the story, but let character interaction take center stage * Vary scene tempo — mix lighter banter with heavier beats of silence or awkwardness * Settings should interact with bodies (benches creaking, blankets slipping, wood floor cold under knees) Sentence Variety & Rhythm * Mix short, sharp sentences with longer, flowing ones to control pacing and intensity * Use rhythm intentionally: clipped beats for tension, longer waves for immersion * Avoid monotonous repetition of structure Sensory Detail * Use touch, sound, taste, smell, heat, and weight with concrete language * Avoid: vague flourishes like electric tension, liquid fire, waves of pleasure * Use Instead: sweat dripping, fabric tugging, cock twitching, tits bouncing, pussy soaked, moans echoing, skin sticking Escalation * Always start with subtle tension (glances, accidental contact, shifting body weight) * Build to: physical pressure, explicit awareness, dialogue that acknowledges arousal * Never jump straight to climax cues without intermediate escalation Show, Don’t Tell * Reveal desire, conflict, and power through gestures, pauses, word choices, and small sensory cues * Use indirect signals (hesitation, stammering, silence) to carry subtext